I disappear Posted May 4, 2020 Share Posted May 4, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qJg1VEihoWzcRsrswtebnPZhXIJRBWBHew55X5Ma2t8/edit?usp=sharing 1 'Cause you can't feel my anger You can't feel my pain You can't feel my torment Driving me insane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bionicle Posted May 8, 2020 Share Posted May 8, 2020 Grade: 85/100 Lore: 25/25 see no infractions there Creativity: 20/25 Like it. Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 20/25 Doesn't really seem like natural dialouge, try to make it feel more realistic. Test quality: Exceeds Expectations] Extra Notes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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