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SCP-999 Armor test


trevdec29

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Score: 95/100 

Grade: A+

Lore: 20/20

Follows lore well. SCP-999 does indeed leave gel as it moves around and eats candy. Not much to say here. 

Creativity: 15/20

Creative application of SCP-999's gel, similar to the ballistic gel used to represent humans in crash testing and testing weapons. However, I wish you had gone more in-depth on how you would apply scp-999's gel as armor more, the current test and analysis seems kind of vague. 

Presentation: 20/20 

followed the format well, the document is well organized and I like that you added extra sections to improve on the test log.

Writing: 40/40

minor spelling errors, but not enough to impact the grade.

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Edited by Breen

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