SCP 999 Test

[Zenitik7]

Name: Nurv

Rank: JR

Clearance Level: 2

List of Personnel involved in testing: Me, Security Sgt And A Mentally Ill D Class (Well He Appeared To Be Since He Had An Iq of 130)

Amount of D class involved: 1

SCP: 999

Errors and/or safety hazards: N/A

Question: Can SCP-999 Heal The Mentally Ill? And Give Better Iq?

Background Research: SCP-999 appears to be a large, amorphous, gelatinous mass of translucent orange slime, weighing about 54 kg (120 lbs) with a consistency similar to that of peanut butter. Subject’s size and shape is easily malleable and can change shape at will, though when at rest, SCP-999 becomes a rounded, oblate dome roughly 2 meters wide and 1 meter in height. The surface of SCP-999 consists of a thin, transparent membrane similar to that of an animal cell roughly .5 cm thick, and is highly elastic, allowing SCP-999 to flatten portions of its body up to 2 cm thin. This surface is also hydrophobic, although SCP-999 can willfully absorb liquids. The rest of SCP-999's body is filled with a viscous orange substance of unknown chemical makeup, though it is capable of digesting organic materials with ease.

Hypothesis: It Will Work.

Observation: It Appeared That The D Class Was Able To Talk Again As well as His Iq Went Up Dramatically By 200 And He Was Very Appreciative To Scp 999. But In An Approximate 40-45 Mins He Was Mentally Ill And Couldn’t Talk Again. I Thought This Was Very Strange.

Analysis: It Seems That This Creature (Scp 999) Has A Very Useful Ability And Can Serve A Vital Role In The Foundation Of SCP.

Conclusion: In Conclusion Scp 999 Also Known As The Tickle Monster That It Can Help Us Facility Staff With Many Things.

Do your results align with your hypothesis?: Yes

[SS1]

Author: NURV

Rank: JR

SCP(s): 999

Test: 999 HEALING

 

Formatting: 10/10

*Was this test formatted correctly?*

Yes.
 

Grammar: 7/10

*Was this test log written with correct grammar?*

Please do not capitalize each and every word you type, it confuses readers. Also, try not to start sentences with "and": 

11 hours ago, Zenitik7 said:

Question: Can SCP-999 Heal The Mentally Ill? And Give Better Iq?

 

Lore: 10/10

*Was this test log written with the correct lore in mind?*

Yes, 999 is able to heal and mentally reconstruct patients.
 

Quality: 6/10

*What effort was put into this test log?*

Maybe a bit more of an elaboration on the observation, like 5 or so sentences. Also try to add more spice to the testing, it is well known that 999 is able to heal people with mental and physical trauma.
 

Overall: 8/10

*What’s the overall grade of this test?*

Could've easily been a 10 if there was more elaboration on part of the observation and analysis.

 

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