SS1

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  1. Maybe less bullet points but more information on each, good grammar and explanations though, try to add more information pertaining to lore in general. STANDARD TEST
  2. Very detailed and a long test log that explains everything well. Good examples and data given are accurate to lore, all around a very well written test. QUALITY TEST
  3. Great formatting and I hope to see this in future posts as it makes the log seem very realistic. However, try to be overly professional with your writing in the test logs, and use D-Class personnel instead of D-Bois. Other than that, the whole thing is very nicely written and it all flows together aesthetically with the nicely planned format. Try to also include more information in the future but this is very good for AR. STANDARD TEST
  4. First off, wow, and thanks for all of the typing you did and nothing I type can truly display the appreciation to your cause in the branch. I hope that this test can allow lower tier researchers to view what a superb example of a test is in their upcoming future. Well written and detailed at all points. Great examples with pictures and font/editorial selections Well rounded test with easy to read information. QUALITY TEST.
  5. Evenly formatted and well written. I was looking for more content to read, and an easier to read style in total, but not a bad test. STANDARD TEST
  6. Very well written with extremely good grammar and accuracy via lore. It was a bit overwhelming to read and then see the pictures at the end but they weren't too gory. Very nice job tying everything together and trying to warn me about the pictures. QUALITY TEST
  7. Love the illustrations, and there's a decent amount of text but not too much that it's overwhelming. Good balance of examples and information, but I recommend working on grammar a bit more to make it seem a bit more professional. QUALITY TEST
  8. Well formatted, I myself do not have the patience to do some of that line stuff but good work on that. The text could be expanded with that too, and more information in general would've been nice. STANDARD TEST
  9. Quality Test, very good vocabulary, over the top detail. If I could have any recommendations, as small as they would be, I'd request that you make it easier to follow with bigger titles of the different sections and whatnot.
  10. Adding onto this, you obviously enjoy the server enough to donate money, good dedication.
  11. MAINLY: Look, I'll just make this straight and to the point, but if you want some more information I can offer that privately. I have a lot of stuff going on in real life, including but not limited to school, extracurricular activities, social life, important relationships, community events, and family matters. I'd truly love to be on all day and every day to help Research grow as a group, but with all of that plus more, it's getting harder each day to help you guys. Like tagged, this is a 48 hour notice, so if you have anything you'd like to do with me for my last breath on Research, let me know. ALSO: I've been on Research for a while, and I'll be honest, it's gotten more boring than usual. No, it's not Weiss and his "meep" obsession, or Protege and his tea, but rather the amount of stuff I challenge myself on, has died down. I enjoyed writing test logs, and although I didn't realize it at the time, that was my best time in Research. I truly wish that more people understood that. Furthermore, there's been a dramatic increase in test logs and overall morale in the branch, and I love seeing that but it just puts more unwanted anxiety on me to check over it and compliment all of you guys on great jobs. I'd love to sit here and give excuses, but at the end of the day, I'm not a leader, and I honestly feared becoming DHOR or HOR due to my lack of common sense. Plus I'd like to mention the activity of Research as a whole- I know we cannot change this, and it seems to be taking a better turn with more members, but I believe that we need more activity. We're the bread and butter of the Foundation whether you like that analogy or not, so you guys gotta be on constantly and keep those d-boys from getting rowdy, and keep MTF occupied when you "accidentally" breach 5 966s. Finally, I've got two major roles in this server that cannot really be handled so easily, being staff and low command of a branch. I cannot juggle both of these and no offense to Research at all, but keeping the server clean is more important. (I'll mainly be on staff if you end up needing me.) Welp, on that note, I hope to see some of you guys get higher in the ranks and become supreme leaders or something someday, but when that happens, don't forget your unwanted idol, SS1. ill miss you :c if you ever need me, let me know on discord or in-game
  12. Nice little test 9/10 could've had more lore ?