Warthog Posted May 2, 2023 Share Posted May 2, 2023 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wUUw7zBQJGVpb-sNb5f7E6xzYuEKhUhhj4O8JFnsgaY/edit?usp=sharing #RipRND you will be missed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devil Doc Posted May 7, 2023 Share Posted May 7, 2023 Format: 19/20- Looks very good. Only suggestion would be to maybe change the font to a more typewritter-esque. Grammar: 17/20- Some minor grammatical errors, punctuation etc Quality: 18/20- I like the different use of italics to break thinks up into different sections. Length: 15/20- Easy to read. I think you definitely could have gone more in depth with the test. Lore knowledge: 20/20- I don't see any issues with incorrect lore or anything. Seems like everything is correct in this department. Total: 89/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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