Roulette Posted February 26, 2023 Share Posted February 26, 2023 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DvOK1BFrDrFqYKKPewWVlHPcbvtpDmM-lZxRUuxCsdE/edit?usp=sharing Pretty proud of this one, happy reading! (HAD SOME ERRORS WITH FORMATTING, FIXED NOW) Edited February 26, 2023 by Roulette 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stryker_ Posted March 1, 2023 Share Posted March 1, 2023 Assigned for grading, please wait 1-3 days to receive your grade. Username: Stryker Status: Resigned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost05 Posted March 1, 2023 Share Posted March 1, 2023 Grammar/writing: 23/25- Didn't see that many mistakes with the document Creativity/Execution: 24/25- I loved how you made a whole new Cell for 173 and loved the test idea Lore: 14/25- Could use some more information about SCP-173. Also instead of adding a whole link into the doc about something use your words instead it keeps the log more official and less OOC Length/Format: 23/25- Loved the format that you used for this and liked the X-Rays and pictures of the Cell itself. The length was really good TOTAL: 84/100 This was a great 173 test doc. Next time just add more lore into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roulette Posted March 1, 2023 Author Share Posted March 1, 2023 2 hours ago, Ghost05 said: Lore: 14/25- Could use some more information about SCP-173. Also instead of adding a whole link into the doc about something use your words instead it keeps the log more official and less OOC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stryker_ Posted March 15, 2023 Share Posted March 15, 2023 Grammar/writing: 23/25 - Almost no mistakes on the grammar and writing, good job.Creativity/Execution: 22/25 - Decent idea and the execution part was great.Lore: 22/25 - Lore usage was good, could be a bit more detailed though. Length/Format: 22/25 - Pretty decent read, format was also good. Extra points: (This is given when I really enjoyed and loved reading the document 90+) TOTAL: 89/100 Well done on this test log, I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the work! Username: Stryker Status: Resigned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Zitterman Posted March 18, 2023 Share Posted March 18, 2023 This was a fire ass log mah boi, look at that smexy formatting, all that information, the photos! GAT DAYUM! Give this man a promotion pronto. Proficient Technical Researcher Dr. Jake Zitterman | Agent Banksy IN-1 FBI OPEN UP! Unusual Incidents Unit Director Stan Smith Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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