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207-966, Soda Demons


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Lore - 14/15

Good lore explained everything 966 does just no origin or where 966 instances were first located.

Length - 15/20

No pictures, Boring theme, pretty short but still pretty good.

Creativity - 15/15

Haven't seen a test like this within 6 months so good.

Grammar - 29.5/30

Really only saw like 1 major grammar error that I'm going to count which was where you put 699 instead of 966.

Format - 10/20

Again, pretty boring format maybe try something more aesthetic next time.

FINAL SCORE

83.5

Overall, a decent doc but it could have some major improvements.

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Grammar/writing: 21/25  - Small mistakes here and there

Creativity/Execution: 18/25 -  Decent idea and Execution.

Lore: 22/25 -  Lore usage was good.


Length/Format: 15/25 - Decent read, just bit to short and with the format it's quite basic, could also use some pictures to make it better.

 

Extra points:  (This is given when I really enjoyed and loved reading the document 90+)

TOTAL: 76/100

Decent test log, with some improvements could be great.

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