Peanut The Great Posted January 29, 2023 Share Posted January 29, 2023 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGotbsXLfMG4QNtbSymXo6Fd0SV1pZo1O5JIQlAVGP4/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stryker_ Posted February 1, 2023 Share Posted February 1, 2023 -=Your request has been received=- 1 Username: Stryker Status: Resigned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Above the Law Posted February 5, 2023 Share Posted February 5, 2023 -INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS- TOTAL GRADE: 68/100 - Overall not terrible but could use some work. Try making a longer document with a long experiment. Try not to use the description, containment procedures, or images as filler. Length 16/25 - Could've been longer, it seems like images and gifs were used as filler. Creativity: 21/25 - Pretty interesting test idea, haven't seen this one before. Presentation: 15/25 - The gifs and videos make it kind of hard to pay attention. There should be a good mix of videos and images compared to text. There were also several graphical bugs such as long white lines taking up almost the entire document. Writing: 16/25 - Really short test, not much to read. The Description and containment procedures were pasted from the wiki but you made sure to change it so you wouldn't get yelled at which is a +-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE- HOR CRYPTONUS Username: CryptonusHead of Research | MTF A-1 LCPL PINE "[OOC] Trial Moderator | MTF E11 MRK LCPL Prox: Alexx why did you suck me?" - Prox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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