Homeless Posted January 16, 2023 Share Posted January 16, 2023 > Terminal accessed. . . . . Personnel L.DS > L.DS >> open file >> Gamma.Rho.Delta 23-B.scan] > L.DS opening file . . . . > USER >> . . . .. > PASSWORD >> ******* >> ACCESS GRANTED. "The Bloody Machine" 1 CI Assistant Inspector Homeless Bioengineer Gaming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elevate Posted January 18, 2023 Share Posted January 18, 2023 (edited) [Regular Log Rating] Efficiency: 20/25 The length for the document is i believe perfect! you go over everything needed without dragging it along too much. I learnt i believe mostly everything i need about this SCP. Insight: 20/25 Great testing was achieved, through interesting methods of giving it blood and alpha agents. Presentation: 25/25 The document looks incredible! I don't know if you used a format or made this yourself, either way I'm very impressed! Writing: 23/25 The writing was engaging and overall great! I would love to see more of this! Verdict: One of my favorite documents to date, It was fun to read, creative in its writing, and stunning to look at! I think this document deserves a.... 88/100 - Graded by Elevate Edited January 18, 2023 by -Elevate- 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Human Posted January 18, 2023 Share Posted January 18, 2023 Grade: 66/100 Keep at this. this is really good Lore: 16/25 Looks good and cool on a lore side Creativity: 15/25 a killer machine is a neat idea Presentation: 21/25 Looks really cool and has some intresting looks Writing: 14/25 It had some good flare and good grammer from what i seen. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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