scotched Posted September 24, 2022 Share Posted September 24, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TZHWYujqnzav5TXWgRbkgGPap8Sk273A89Px67KinZA/edit?usp=sharing Current: Nu-7 2LT scotched ZETA, CI MSGT scotched Former: DT PFC CR7, IC DMS SFC 1205 Corr, IQ/Purge MSG/Lord III Lucifer, MC SS PFC Freyja 1170, ST/Shore ENG SCT SFC griff 1277, LCPL Mark 1B57, State Trooper PVT Mark, FBI SA David Martinez IF Squad Lead (CPT) Neeko Ivy, SHG Senior Guard (1LT) Lucifer, BWA Owner Spiral, RIS Unit R scotched, Security MSGT WDXH IJG scotched CI R&D IIN(WO) scotched MTF D5 SRO DDIR SVFTO CPT scotched ZETA/G9 Murmillo Daimyo GM1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Stedmen Posted September 24, 2022 Share Posted September 24, 2022 Lore: 0/25 Feel free to correct me if I am wrong, but I thoroughly investigated the SCP wiki and found zero evidence it affects its surroundings. All it does is show what a subject wants to be doing at that time. Don't see how it could open keycards in any capacity. While I definitely see CI using this, it'd likely be for vastly different reasons than what was presented here. Creativity: 10/25 I will give some points for the attempt to try and use an off-site SCP in a unique manner but with the lore not matching up at all I can't really give that much credit here. Presentation: 10/25 I will give some points to you here for changing up the template but for EOI grading you should be making your own format. Writing: 15/25 I see a lot of needless capitalization and you don't capitalize your own name at all for some reason. Run your shit through Grammarly next time. Overall Grade: 35/100 Use your own document format next time if you gonna go for EOI Grading, also next time please do some more research into the SCP you are writing a test log on! Former SCPRP: CI R&D Chief Director of Operations || Research Administrator || RFA Operations Advisory || RRH Analyst Xray 77 || CI General || Senior Event Team || CI Lieutenant Commander || Exemplary Investigator Award Recipient || STF D4 Poseidon PL7 || A1 SPC "Quantum" Former ImperialRP: Naval Captain || Security Director || GM VI Former PoliceRP: EMS Captain || RRU Rapid Response Team Manager || FBI Assistant Director Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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