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SCP-500 | The Two Halfs


Carrotss

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SCP 500 is an onsite SCP meaning you'd have to have the events happen in RP. Gonna give it a pass this time however as I don't want to discourage the writing of documents.

Lore: 20/25

The test itself was accurate to the lore and the outcome was realistic in terms of the SCP in question. Good job!

Creativity:18/25

I liked the outcome but the concept behind the test to be honest isn't that original. However, your writing did show a lot of creativity which fetched you some extra points.

Presentation:12/25

If you are gunning for EOI you should be making your own documents. I gave some extra points for good use of colors but take some time to create your own template.

Writing: 20/25

While I know the people in this test weren't real, you showed some excellent writing skills here and you did impress me in this regard.

Overall Grade: 70/100

-L1 Heisenberg I

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