Heyboyz0081 Posted May 19, 2022 Share Posted May 19, 2022 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V4wEfCkaGZWOIYYNUTSJ0xJWt7oLZ7TZwJDUGIJEvaE/edit?usp=sharing This is Part 2 of 3 first one is linked below. The last one will be added when I finish it. Edited May 27, 2022 by Heyboyz0081 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warthog Posted May 26, 2022 Share Posted May 26, 2022 RFA Assessment Results: Grammar: 6/10 "-Instead of having the D-class take the antibiotics once. We are going-" Does not need a period unnecessary "he" in the "background research" section try not to constantly refer to SCP-049 as "he". It can get confusing trying to figure out who you are talking about if this continues in the future. "I grab the pills and head down" Grab and head should be in past tense. Design: 2/10 The format is just white text on a black background. I would suggest you put more effort into making your log look neat. Lore: 8/10 SCP-049 seems to act lore friendly except for the part where he threatens to kill you. Would have liked to see more of SCP-049's reactions. Creativity: 6/10 Would have liked to have seen some pictures or even diagrams of the medication. Next time explain what each medication does (including potential side effects). Final Score: 22/40 -OA2 #RipRND you will be missed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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