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The Neophytes of the sea[SCP 3229-A Genetic testing]


Drago

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GRAMMAR/TYPOGRAPHY - 10/10

I did not notice any mistakes while reading this document.

PRESENTATION/AESTHETIC - 9/10

Nice formatting, and I really like the reference to other parts of the Foundation not found in game ( Although pretty basic ). 

WRITING - 8/10

I like the use of military time, the writing feels ( mostly ) on point. Although, could have used some reviewing and sentence revision in my opinion.

TOTAL - 27/30 

This one was nice to read, nice job Drago! 

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