Jummy Posted April 27, 2022 Share Posted April 27, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vCSlWGueumnlo8SSg27nC6iYZ8DRDnf-LqYkWucNgRQ/edit?usp=sharing Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catalyst Posted April 27, 2022 Share Posted April 27, 2022 Assigned for @Ren Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren1point0 Posted April 27, 2022 Share Posted April 27, 2022 Grading! Grammar/Spelling/Typography: 8/10 Noticed some small sentence structing mistakes, "No cause of death was determined during autopsy, however it was leaking a goopy, black fluid from its beak." 'however' should have a comma after it, since it is being used as a parentheses (to convey additional information). Presentation/Style/Aesthetic: 8/10 Nice but fairly generic formatting and style, maybe a more "official" look would be nice next time. I did like the use of Military Time though, makes it feel realistic and accurate. Writing: 8/10 Writing style fits SCP universe and lore, and I like how you divided the log. Total: 24/30 - 8/10 - 80/100 I thought this document was neat and creative, we definitely need more 'report' style documents from Research. Good job as always Parvati, I look forward to seeing your now documents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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