Former DHOR D Posted January 18, 2022 Share Posted January 18, 2022 Should intermittent vengeance arm again his red right hand to plague us? <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e7Ee90UfDXTHoHKk8Q4BKqP1OiHnL7ihnQWbUCT1RE0/edit> ~Enjoy - Diogenes 1 DHOR D; RRH Analyst Lima-3; Sarkic Archon General; Former-Omicron-9 2LT Saw; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Stedmen Posted January 20, 2022 Share Posted January 20, 2022 Overall Grade: 98/100 [A+] Lore: 25/25 Went above and beyond the call of duty trying to match the lore, going as far as to include sources. Creativity: 25/25 Damn this was very creative in many ways, must have done a LOT of research for this. I am impressed. Presentation: 25/25 Presentation flowed pretty smoothly and was easy to read. Good work! I can tell you put a lot of effort into this as well. Writing: 23/25 Couple of minor grammar errors such as needless capitalization. Here is a tip, run that shit through Grammarly, it should remove any spelling errors and save you a lot of time. Notes: Great work agent! You put a lot of effort into this and it won't go unnoticed! Former SCPRP: CI R&D Chief Director of Operations || Research Administrator || RFA Operations Advisory || RRH Analyst Xray 77 || CI General || Senior Event Team || CI Lieutenant Commander || Exemplary Investigator Award Recipient || STF D4 Poseidon PL7 || A1 SPC "Quantum" Former ImperialRP: Naval Captain || Security Director || GM VI Former PoliceRP: EMS Captain || RRU Rapid Response Team Manager || FBI Assistant Director Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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