J0s4U8 Posted November 3, 2021 Share Posted November 3, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1n3v4qZnKt_gmFYCsdNLsIEau-KYzHizYXtlM2BAG6y4/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catalyst Posted November 3, 2021 Share Posted November 3, 2021 Grade: 75/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Insight: 20/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 15/25 Additional comment: Some minor formatting and spelling mistakes, but overall accomplishes the goal. Doing a simple proof read can often make a big difference in the outcome of a log. I can also appreciate that the tone of the log sets the expectation that more information to be entered about "The Baker". it allows you to continue pursuing this "truth" if one so desires, and that is done very stylistically. Overall: Meets expectations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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