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Onsite Case File: MiracleElixir


Eben

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Thank you for sharing the on-site test, very interesting to read and very unique idea. I like how rather than taking a dangerous substance and finding ways to weaponize it you instead looked for how it could provide to be useful in the medical field. Very interesting take on this SCP which was made even more exciting by the writing you used to back it up. Almost felt like I was there in the moment experiencing this amazing on-site happen. Would've been nice if you took it one small step further to show how being able to combat these diseases could help CI get ahead of the foundation in some way, but still a great test log. Let me know if you make another in the future, and I would be happy to read it over.

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R&D Chief Inspector and Poop Inspector

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