RedKnight Posted March 23, 2021 Share Posted March 23, 2021 (edited) SCP Object: 096 Document Level: 3 Password: ......... Password accepted, welcome USER.Personnel: Lead Researcher Rachel Corbin Rig Unit BA513CThe RIG unit was sent in by Rachel Corbin with a knife and a few syringes to enter the chamber to collect blood and skin samples Sample 1 Type: Blood Part: Skull Blood Type: A DNA Strand: AD DA CB CB AD CB CB AD Known human match: The late Kelly Carson Sample 2 Type: Skin Part: Skull Blood Type: B- DNA Strand: BC AD CB CB AD CB CB BC BC Known human match: The late Adam Johns Sample 3 Type: Skin Part: Spine Blood Type: B- DNA Strand: BC AD CB CB AD CB CB BC BC Known human match: The late Adam Johns Sample 4 Type: Blood Part: Spine Blood Type: A DNA Strand: AD DA CB CB AD CB CB AD Known human match: The late Kelly CarsonAddendum: It is unknown if 096 regenerates parts of its body with those it eats or if 096 is made out of the DNA of Mr. Johns and Mrs. Carson, more testing may be needed Edited March 23, 2021 by RedKnight Forgot to add the redacted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lUCI Posted March 23, 2021 Share Posted March 23, 2021 (edited) 95/100 - Nicely sized - Could not find any grammar errors - Nice attention to detail - Interesting Concept - some things are a bit wierdly written for example "to enter the chamber to collect blood" i would recommend wording it "to enter the chamber and collect blood" Edited March 23, 2021 by lUCI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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