Echo Romeo Posted November 27, 2020 Share Posted November 27, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/15PG6tG3Zbu0XJPPTB71i5SC4gqAmY9affp4Ps6Eqe58/edit?usp=sharing Imperial RP] Ex-Gamemaster| Ex-Starfighter Corps. Officer| Ex-Onyx Squad Officer| Ex-Inferno Squad Squadron Leader| Ex-Shadow Guard Officer VII| INO Chad. SCP RP] Retired-Nu7 1st Lieutenant| Ex-GENSEC Master Sergeant and Junior Warden| Retired-Chaos Insurgency 1st Lieutenant| Zeta-19| Epic Payday Gang(2nd ever)| Ex-A1 Guardian| Ex-Event Team Member."You are a quarter of a million strong, and you shoot well, but what if I showed of with 500,000 men? What would you do?" -Kaiser Wilhelm II "We would shoot twice, and we'd go home" -Swiss Militiaman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dakota Posted November 28, 2020 Share Posted November 28, 2020 Grade: 77/100 Lore: 25/25 Lore seems correct. Creativity: 13/25 This test has been done lots and lots of times. Presentation: 15/25 "Observation 1-A" is supposed to state what happened after the test/log, not be a log itself. Writing: 24/25 No major writing flaws. Missed some punctuation. Test Quality: Exceeds Expectations! Extra Notes: Make sure you follow the format correct (see presentation as for why), also I would like to see some more color, change it up a bit. Also 682 blood tests happen very frequently, it was a good test but next time try and do something a bit more creative. Current: [REDACTED] Former: E11 COL | Deputy Head of FTOs | CI SRIC/LCPL "We die in the dark so that others can live in the light." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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