I disappear Posted April 21, 2020 Share Posted April 21, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1By0xAEzAxpOglsjHqcSkDB9lwccocLqMDjokj9qLvGw/edit?usp=sharing 'Cause you can't feel my anger You can't feel my pain You can't feel my torment Driving me insane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrandNova Posted April 22, 2020 Share Posted April 22, 2020 Grade: 75/100 Lore: 25/25 Creativity: 15/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 15/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expectations Extra Notes: Good test, creativity would be higher due to the general lack of temperature based tests but this is a challenge so it was more obvious. Try to add a bit more creative flare to your writing, describe certain actions a little bit more, using video log instead of audio log works great for this as you can describe certain movements/actions with more detail, would of been interesting if you tested how SCP - 999 reacted to quick change in temperature from cold to hot, like if you were to have them enter the cold one then immediately the hot one. Perhaps a more drastic temperature change would have caused something interesting to happen. Remember you do have some creative liberties when doing tests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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