I disappear Posted April 20, 2020 Share Posted April 20, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/14BQlJ_q6h0OtINxOjoMynmozbhgp6XXysWrIewp5pbk/edit?usp=sharing 'Cause you can't feel my anger You can't feel my pain You can't feel my torment Driving me insane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrandNova Posted April 21, 2020 Share Posted April 21, 2020 Grade: 80/100 Lore: 22/25 Creativity: 23/25 Presentation: 15/25 Writing: 20/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expectations Extra Notes: A good example of an test with an SCP that can't be used in game. Although i would like it more if you explained where and how you got the resource, maybe a transport ship or salvaged from another site? Where you got the chemist would also be good, perhaps you also should of gotten a chemist and weapons expert as both would generally be needed as the chemist wouldn't normally know how to make a weapon.Try and add some more creative flare to your writing, perhaps explain exactly what is happening each time a timeskip happens because without explanation it can leave the reader a little confused on whats going on when it goes unmentioned. Great test though, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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