Sulfur Posted December 12, 2023 Share Posted December 12, 2023 Insert Credentials: <*************>Access Granted Welcome, User. Current: Security DCoS | SM | DHFW | EXCM | RMS | FTO | Secret Service DCOO Retired: Nu-7 CPT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EPN Laggy Shadow Posted December 27, 2023 Share Posted December 27, 2023 Test idea/Lore - 20/25 - Could have gone more in depth with an explanation of 294 but it's still very good. Grammar - 25/25 - I didn't see any real grammar errors in this so really good. Presentation/format - 20/25 - Really good Presentation but the format got a little boring after a while, but it was still really cool to see a log that looked like this as I haven't seen one in a while. quality/length 20/25 - Good quality but it would be better if the log was a bit longer but still amazing. Overall, 85/100 = In general this log was really good just a bit plain on format and the lore could have been explained more and the length could have been a bit longer. Current: Deputy Head of Research! IM BACK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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