Trout Posted May 26, 2023 Share Posted May 26, 2023 Lore Rank/Name: Associate Researcher Wid SCPs/Personnel involved: 106, 294, Utility Inspector CattleMan https://docs.google.com/document/d/100ZYHjZCLktXzEvaLnOVE3QF3-NVHNUkouRMMCLMTho/edit This was all done on my phone as I’m away from my computer, however I believe there aren’t any problems. MTF E-11 DoRCU 2LT Trout MTF O-1 CPL Calypso Retired Maintenance Command Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gigazet Posted June 10, 2023 Share Posted June 10, 2023 Creativity 25/25 - I love and hate 106 so I like how you portrayed the story of what happened here. Format/Grammar: 24/25 - No glaring spelling mistakes caught and the format is nice to read. Only small issue was using Began instead of Begun. Began being past tense of begin while begun would be a past participle for begin fitting the grammar of the context. Very minor issue but one nonetheless. Lore 25/25 - Great combination of 106 and 294 and trying to fit it into the RP of the server. Keep up the great cross tests! Length 18/25 - A little too short for such an amazing tale of a mans struggle with life and death. 92/100 Overall a great read and I did factor in doing this on a phone rather than a computer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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