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Tamamo Nugs

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    Scp 999 test

    in Foundation Test Logs

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    I see a major issue with this document.  The observation is supposed to be what happened during the test, but it looks like you chopped out a lot of detail and headed straight to the results rather than explaining the entire process.  You should think about that next time.

    Also, in general, I notice a lot of grammar mistakes, (SCP-999 is "Scp 999", you don't really use commas or apostrophes, there's some things that needed to be capitalized, etc.), so make sure you run it through a grammar checker or double check your document before posting it.

    Don't take this as me thinking your document is shit, but take it more as advice for future documents since documents do get graded.

    Math with 173

    in Foundation Test Logs

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    Not really here to grade your test, but the formatting is pretty rough.  Having a white paper with colored text is harder to read than with a black paper with colored text.  Also, I'm not really sure what your coloring is for when it comes to the relationship between the thing you colored and the color.

    In one of my text logs, the colors were coordinated: D-Class were colored orange, SCP's were colored based off their class, and MTF/GenSec/Other personnel were colored based off their color in-game.  I also colored based off of good outcomes and bad outcomes (green being good, red being bad, yellow being meh).  Green and yellow also referred to ideas I had (yellow being an idea, green being the actual outcome I expected.)

    However, when I look at this doc, I dont see any coordination in the coloring.  Researcher is green, SCP is red, the word "it" was red, you made every "I" and "Me" green, and you made GenSec blue?  I mean, typing it out like that made it easier to understand.  SCP is red cause its the SCP you're testing on, "I", "Me", and Researcher was green because that was you, and Gensec was colored in blue cause it was your escort, but that doesn't really work out.  The one part about the color coding that works out, though, is D class, but that's about it.

    TL;DR, If you're gonna color code, try to do it in a way that's more descriptive instead of in a way for identification.  We know who you are, we know who the escort was, and we know what the SCP is.

    What's a game you're heavily addicted to for no good reason.

    in General Discussions

    Posted · Edited by Tamamo Nugs

    For me, it'd have to be osu.  I signed up in 2016, quit for 2 years, came back, and have been playing since.  From february 2018 to now, there's only 2 months where I havent played.  Every other month I played the game in some capacity.  Its honestly an issue cause even if I uninstall it, Ill end up reinstalling it and playing it again even though I hate everything about it other than the music I listen to.

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