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Gealdýr #3 RFA Admission Log


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[CURRENT] CI SSGT, RnD SVA, CQOP, STS, Apollo Theta Unit, F5 Satan V

[FORMER] Nu7 CPL||E11 SSGT => CEO||CI RnD SVA||SEC SM||D5 SSGT => CTF ESL Pyxis||MA||RRH Engineer Delta 16||RA => RFA Freyja PA1||Senior Mod||Chief Manager => HMR|

[CUSTOM CLAN] Global Occult Coalition S-3  Horizon Initiative Legion III       [CUSTOM JOBS] MTF Delta-1

[MISC] SILVER ENJOYER // Permanent Guns: Trench Knife, Karambit Black Laminate, Hatchet 

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Grammar/writing: 22/25  - Decent writing and grammar. 

Creativity/Execution: 21/25 -  Very creative idea, but it did feel like some details were left out.

 

Event (seeing no SCP itself was used but reality warping):  20/25 - It's a great story, the only thing I found was being bit clueless on how this all started, as there is no story written down leading to this event. 


Length/Format: 22/25 - It's a good read, liked reading this and it's unique

 

Extra points: 0/1 (This is given when I really enjoyed and loved reading the document 90+)


TOTAL: 85/100

Great test log, the only issue is just the background leading to this test log, as I was bit confused on what was happening and why. 

Username: Stryker

Status: Resigned

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