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The Mind Serum Pt1


Kami- Amaterasu

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Grade: 55.5/100
Meets Expectations

 

Lore: 12.5/25
I have no idea how to grade this when no lore is involved, so you get the middle to make it fair

 

Creativity: 14/25
Making MTF go feral is a creative way to eliminate them, could also make them attack other foundation, very nice.

 

Presentation: 14/25
All 3 serum logs are amazing, normal test is normal format. Again, like the paper in file, just overall nice but misses the spark!

 

Writing: 15/25
Very little playing with writing, reading it is boring to the eye if it was just for the appearance of words alone, spelling is fine

Note: Loved it! Keep it up

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