Kami- Amaterasu Posted November 17, 2022 Share Posted November 17, 2022 Rodan/Kami Log found in this File [SCP-RP] Retired: CI RND DHOR/RA/CIN, Engineer/OS, Omi9 Maj, SET. [IMP-RP] Previous: CMO Captain, SFL, Tank VCMDR Shock VCMDR GMVIII Officially Married to Mary 2/23/23 EMPRESS OF D-BLOCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeaR x Green Pikachu Posted November 24, 2022 Share Posted November 24, 2022 Grade: 51/100 Meets Expectations Efficiency: 13/25 Questions could be better, getting information like Checkpoint stations, SCP locations, squads, ETC. However, information is all logged together and straight to the point Insight: 15/25 Basic interrogation, but I love the lore involved! It adds actual roleplay to the log and shows actual character, very enjoyable to read Presentation: 11/25 I'm not gonna lie, didn't realise this was the basic log until after, but, putting it in a file that's written on paper is extremely neat. Writing: 12/25 No noticeable grammar errors. I know its written on a paper and wouldn't make sense, but it lacks color or something extra (Words spelt wrong so they're crossed out and replaced, redacted words ETC.) Notes: I love the way this is laid out a lot, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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