SaturdaySquadron Posted November 16, 2022 Share Posted November 16, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wYRH-lfVc6bEAkCqlO5DmF4msmaKrZytCVV7aVD1M-k/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeaR x Green Pikachu Posted November 24, 2022 Share Posted November 24, 2022 (edited) Grade: 58/100 Meets Expectations Lore: 18/25 Not much to cover so not much to grade, 049 falling asleep like that though is a hot topic Creativity: 15/25 I love 049 tranq idea! Wish there was further elaboration though, the substance just came out of nowhere with no description Presentation: 15/25 New presentation epic, its still a bit bland though, nothing special, just looks like a reworked version. I love the camera effects! and the moving as well, very cool. Writing: 10/25 Very few grammar mistakes, however, the colors are extremely bland and its boring for the eyes. Its short, to the point but short. Notes: Good test log, keep it up! Edited November 24, 2022 by FeaR x Green Pikachu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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