lUCI Posted September 12, 2022 Share Posted September 12, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ue7ouFJB4SVLJTeIGvSuuHLbITbYAQjX3SDokx4-sEk/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jummy Posted September 18, 2022 Share Posted September 18, 2022 Test log (?) assigned for grading, please wait 1-3 days for final score. Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizz80 Posted September 18, 2022 Share Posted September 18, 2022 Writing/Grammar: 15/20 There are noticeable grammar mistakes as well as writing mistakes. You used lowercase "i" instead of capital "I" in your document. Also, there are a few places where you missed the comma. Test Idea/Execution: 10/20 This isn't the place for your character's background. You should post your test logs here, so that's why you get minus points. But besides that, it's great character lore. Format: 18/20 The format is really nice. It reminds me of a real foundation document. The text is readable and the font used is nice. Also, the use of pictures is appreciated. Length: 17/20 The length is decent. It could have been longer, but I don't think it was needed. It's all filled with rich text. Good job! Lore: 20/20 The lore is what brings this document to light. Your description of the character is amazing. It's believable and doesn't seem farfetched. Great job! Wanderer's Library Archivist Point: 0/1 (This is my personal point, giving it to the document that I enjoyed. If you get this point, it means you made a phenomenal document) Total score: 75/100 You made a good document describing your character, but this place is for test logs. Overall, you described your character very well! Username: GrizzPositions: Retired Awards: Wanderer's Library Archivist x2 | The Exemplary Investigator Award Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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