Salamander Guy Posted September 7, 2022 Share Posted September 7, 2022 I hope you enjoy!https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V0yTfr_WzXQmndVgKUuX4XkXwbAEHhypSO1zpbBr3nE/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domz Posted September 11, 2022 Share Posted September 11, 2022 Please wait 1-3 days for grading! FORMER: Foundation Doctor , RFA SIC/OA1 , SEC SFC, WD-V Eqvites Antonius MONK CI DHLS , CI SM , RRH Analyst , D5 MSGT , Maintenance ME "Domz" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizz80 Posted September 11, 2022 Share Posted September 11, 2022 Writing/Grammar: 19.5/20 There are very few grammar mistakes. Overall, everything looks great; very detailed sentences. Test Idea/Execution: 20/20 I like that you included 2 test logs in one document. Your ideas and execution are phenomenally done. You have done an excellent job explaining what happened. Format: 18/20 The format is nice, remind me of a official SCP Document. The font and text size are perfect for reading. You should have added more pictures, it would help the reader better understand what happened during testing. Length: 20/20 The length is great. 9 pages long, all filled with text. Great job! Lore: 20/20 I really like the proposal to change the object class of an SCP. You have given a valid reason for the change, with the evidence and testing to prove it. The lore checks out; everything presented matches the behavior of 098. Amazing job! Wanderer's Library Archivist Point: 1/1 (This is my personal point, giving it to the document that I enjoyed. If you get this point, it means you made a great document) Total score: 98.5/100 This is a phenomenal document. You did a amazing job. Keep up the good work! Username: GrizzPositions: Retired Awards: Wanderer's Library Archivist x2 | The Exemplary Investigator Award Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nydekore Posted September 11, 2022 Share Posted September 11, 2022 1 hour ago, Grizz80 said: Wanderer's Library Archivist Point: 1/1 (This is my personal point, Flexing on these people 0_0 Former: Deputy Head of Research | MTF Nu-7 Captain x2 | SCPRP Super Admin | MTF O-1 Major Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avalon Levi Posted September 23, 2022 Share Posted September 23, 2022 (edited) On 9/11/2022 at 3:08 PM, Nydekore said: Flexing on these people 0_0 % Edited September 23, 2022 by Avalon Levi "So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God" ~ Isaiah 41:10Currently: Head Of Research | HOSM Sub-Zero | Ghost OA0 | Emeritus Professor | R.A.U Grand Commissioner Former: Security 1LT | Medical Supervisor | Moderator | Event Team Member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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