Catalyst Posted August 11, 2022 Share Posted August 11, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/139w0cFjHSsVSZiz_b3JclVQFllFQXQcT2ijE2dV1lXY/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpicSealGamer (ESG) Posted August 12, 2022 Share Posted August 12, 2022 (edited) Grade: 58/100 Lore: 13/25 Though I don't think that's how indoor humidity works. Also, according to what I've read, that lake will be coming for you. Creativity: 15/25 You simply just took notes on the environment, instead of thinking of an idea of your own. Presentation: 13/25 It looks alright, but there's none of that personal flare. Writing: 17/25 there was a few grammar issues, along with that large gap in-between the two sections. Test quality: Meets Expectations Extra Notes: I would have liked to hear more about what you did to the lake, like what machines you used and what methods. ~Overseer Honeypot Edited August 12, 2022 by EpicSealGamer (ESG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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