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Fierian's SCP-012 Test


Fierian

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GRAMMAR: (7.5/10)

Saw no major flaws in the grammar. Was rather simplistic but could still relay the information.

PRESENTATION: (8.5/10)

I do love seeing the computers in game being utilized the way they are supposed to be! Also moving forward I would like to see what you can achieve with a google doc format, and have the ability to create some really in depth documents

LORE: (8/10)

It was definitely a cool idea to test the RIS unit, but from my research it wouldn't really have any affect on the robot, due to the RIS aren't sentient beings. They are drones being piloted by other researchers. (maybe redo the test but monitor the pilot of the RIS while they perform.

CREATIVITY: (9/10)

This is definitely a fun idea to work with. I would have personally loved to see even more information, but that is a restrain with the in game computers. Good Job Researcher

OVERALL: 8/10

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