Domz Posted July 19, 2022 Share Posted July 19, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/11GVoBQfnL5tm7zv98w0QXT0KgszUEJEg5Fp7PFN_6uM/edit?usp=sharing I tried hard on this and took me multiple hours to create, I hope you'll like it. Not canon 1 FORMER: Foundation Doctor , RFA SIC/OA1 , SEC SFC, WD-V Eqvites Antonius MONK CI DHLS , CI SM , RRH Analyst , D5 MSGT , Maintenance ME "Domz" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domz Posted July 19, 2022 Author Share Posted July 19, 2022 Assigned For Grading Please wait 1-3 days for results FORMER: Foundation Doctor , RFA SIC/OA1 , SEC SFC, WD-V Eqvites Antonius MONK CI DHLS , CI SM , RRH Analyst , D5 MSGT , Maintenance ME "Domz" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adams the research one Posted July 22, 2022 Share Posted July 22, 2022 Writing(7/10) Writing of this document was decent. I feel as if this log fell a little short of a test log, however overall was very clear and consice, as well as documenting this test very well Creativity(3/10) I cannot lie the creativity is a little lacking on this one. The idea of simply producing a stronger acid within 682s chamber is a little bland. And as said in the log the negative side effects that could come from a test of this nature make this idea a little sub-par. And once again I feel as if this test would have worked better as an activity log Design(5/10) The design was alright. Love what you did with the picture at the top but that was about it. After that felt like I was reading a normal google doc. The theme is good and all but i just feel as if more could have gotten done Overall(5/10) The doc was alright. As stated above I feel as if this would have worked better as an activity log. Most of my other feedback is listed in the points above "Read Lesearcher" Former ranks: Research Administrator + Professor RRH Analyst Zulu 99CCs The Patrol Officer (Owner) Snowmen (Owner) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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