TheYinNinja Posted July 10, 2022 Share Posted July 10, 2022 plz like it https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a_sc1s3M_nalDpGaGKWUIdG-XLYoFkGRIB-gbEOxc70/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JDWhatever Posted July 13, 2022 Share Posted July 13, 2022 TEST LOG ASSIGNED FOR GRADING PLEASE ALLOW 3-5 DAYS FOR YOUR GRADE TO BE POSTED RESEACH ADMINISTRATOR Billybob | THE RFA GOD | Wanderers Library Award Recipient X2 | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheYinNinja Posted August 16, 2022 Author Share Posted August 16, 2022 I am still waiting on my grades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jummy Posted September 2, 2022 Share Posted September 2, 2022 Test Log Assigned for grading, please wait 1-3 days for final score, again. Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JDWhatever Posted September 2, 2022 Share Posted September 2, 2022 Grammar (7/10) The overall grammar is right, no major flaws would absolutely love for you to go a little more indepth with this kinda dialogue. Presentation (5/10) It started off with the feel of a paper, but then the colors gave the effect of a terminal/computer stylistic choice. The colors became a little harsh on the eyes to read and really took me out of what exactly I was reading. It should be noted as well that there was no background information on what SCP-049 is. Lore (8/10) The lore for this SCP was there but again with a previous statement it could have been just a tad bit more in-depth to give a clearer image of who/what SCP-049 is. Creativity (7/10) For me personally I like to see way more when it comes to dialogue logs. This was good but you can definitely bring more with it. TOTAL: 6/10 RESEACH ADMINISTRATOR Billybob | THE RFA GOD | Wanderers Library Award Recipient X2 | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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