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999 and the candy machine (Commission Log)


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GRAMMAR: (8/10)

Grammar here is overall simple. Nothing too complex. Points were clear and concise but contained little detail. 

PRESENTATION: (7/10)

I liked the attempt at the terminal format. I thought some of the formatting was off though. or centered for my personal preference

LORE: (8/10)

Lore wise; everything was rather simple it didn't gather too much information about SCP 999. Just went off as if the reader already knew about it.

CREATIVITY: (8.5/10)

Overall though, this test is creative. I thought it was cool how 999 gave you a piece of candy in return. Was a fun read.  

OVERALL: 8/10

RESEACH ADMINISTRATOR Billybob | THE RFA GOD | Wanderers Library Award Recipient X2 |

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