SCPRP Doggo Posted June 30, 2022 Share Posted June 30, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z7kf4VJeEMd2vIig88AdGromp9UF2KLxtsGr5jql2s8/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super_Smitty Posted July 4, 2022 Share Posted July 4, 2022 Assigned For Grading Please wait 1-3 days for results Senior Event Team | Deputy Head of Research | Superstar Badge Winner | Foundation Star Award RFA - Agent Sigma 0A0 / RRH Analyst - Sierra 17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sgt. Salvador Posted July 5, 2022 Share Posted July 5, 2022 Alright this is my first grade since getting off of LOA and... 173 ate a pickle. What? No color coding for you, because formatting is hard and I'm lazy right now.ok maybe a little. Grammar & Spelling - 9/10 - Very minor grammar errors. No spelling errors were seen if there were any.Format & Length - 6/10 - Format is a bit clunky but it has a nice fit to it. I like the style, but it needs a little bit of rearrangement and polishing. Space some information out a bit but keep relevant bits grouped together. Try to make it look more professional. Could also use some extra visual stimuli outside of the kill agent.Test Idea & Lore - 8/10 - Can't really fault you for SCP-173 eating a pickle because eh... I don't think it can eat but, who knows if it can or not. Neat idea I suppose just... a bit off-putting at first because "SCP-173 Pickle Test Log" is a very menacing test log name.Overall - 6/10 - Well-written but your format and such need work. Take a peek at other test logs that have received high grades, see how they're set up. Keep up the great work Doggo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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