[DEFN] Tangerine Baker Posted June 19, 2022 Share Posted June 19, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N00hF9tjDd0Hh-dgjOKl5lhBtIgDjg3tbXM4I1ob4eE/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozzie_ Posted June 21, 2022 Share Posted June 21, 2022 (edited) Grade: 85/100 Lore: 25/25 Creativity: 25/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 15/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expectations (85%) Extra Notes: A superbly creative idea to fashion SCP-989 into a weapon. I really liked attention to detail in this log. The presentation is good overall, but could use some more colour and flavour throughout, get creative with it! Grammar is mostly good, however I think you should try to channel a more clinical/sterile tone in your next log. Overall a pleasure to read and review. Edited June 21, 2022 by Ozzzie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knuckles Posted June 21, 2022 Share Posted June 21, 2022 Motherfuckers weaponized the candy... there will be retribution 1 When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Make life take the lemons back! Get mad! I don't want your damn lemons what the hell am I supposed to do with these?! Demand to see life's manager. Make life rue the day it thought it could give Cave Johnson lemons. Do you know who I am?! I'm the man who's gonna burn your house down... with the lemons. I'm going to get my engineers to invent me a combustible lemon, that burns your house down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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