SCP-343 Interview

[ButterThe50cal]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/191Qoum5v19qA55fta5qO5GmTNPjPRGBpuSIxrT8CdyQ/edit?usp=sharing

[Super_Smitty]

Test log assigned for grading, wait 1-3 days for your final score.

[Sgt. Salvador]

Grammar & Spelling: 9/10 - Did not notice any spelling errors, only minor grammatical errors.
 

Lore: 8/10 - Giving this some leniency due to it being an in-game test as well as there being little information on SCP-343. SCP-343 does show some suspicious behavior and can easily be guided to a "Cure for the Scarlet King"-type deal. Though SCP-343 does not show any 'ill' feelings toward humans, which is the reason for this score.

Idea: 9/10 - Always nice having a little interview with an SCP. Personally, 343 interviews are my favorite due to the freedom you can have with it. Interesting about asking 343 if they're from the Abrahamic religions. Not a 10, due to it only being an interview. Maybe you could've added some more, perhaps utilizing items from each faith, to see if 343 has an odd reaction to any of them?

Length & Format: 5/10 - Simply could've been longer. More details, such as how 343 moved, the tones of his voice, etc. It doesn't have to be a word-for-word, action-by-action recreation of the in-game test. You can add some extra details that didn't happen, just to make it a better read. Just remember though, quality over quantity. As for the format, it's rather basic. Look at some of the other test logs, especially the highly graded ones, and take notes of those formats. Obviously don't just plagiarize them. Feel free to ask to use another's format if you want to.

Overall Grade: 7/10. Length & format are the deciding factor for this grade. Details are a great way to add length and more for the reader to imagine. Rather good though, just some details and a better format! Great job overall though! Keep it up!