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"Needles of Pain"


doglauncher

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Grade: 100/100

Lore: 25/25

Creativity: 25/25

Presentation: 25/25

Writing: 25/25

Notes: Nice test, I like the realism and the dialogue was long and did follow previous text so that was nice.

Bravo for the netgun idea! It seems like a really nice RP Implementation, further tests may indicate more accurate results as to how this may work. I look forward to seeing more about this, if you want to make more!

Given the time restraint, everything was tried and tested. I like that.

Nice log!

S

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