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Levii

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9.6/10

I loved it!

It was a great read

No spelling mistakes that I noticed 

Great writing

Great role play

For the evidence/visual stimuli I would have liked to see a picture or something but I'll overlook it because I loved your log.

1 or 2 grammar mistakes

 

Edited by grumpysharkan
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