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CURRENT: CI SM
FORMER: | CI R&D IIN (SIN?) | CI EOI Operative | MTF E-11 1LT RRH Analyst November 24 | Maintenance OS
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Grade: 70/100

 

Lore: 15/25 - Not impossible but highly unlikely due to his vast regenerative abilities. 

 

Creativity:20/25 - Never been done before so 

 

Presentation: 20/25 - Very very short and not very insightful 

 

Writing: 15/25 - There were many grammatical error's that I happened to spot. 

 

Test quality: [Meets Expectations]

 

Extra Notes: To redact something in a google doc just color it the same color so make the text white and the paint white, I would recommend going into more depth when making a test logs like [682 is seen developing weird mutations in a response to the uranium he has consumed] another thing to remember is that 682 is not an idiot he likely would've known it was uranium and not have eaten it you would've likely had to cover it up with something.

Overall agent the test wasn't bad however the execution needs work but this is how we all learned to develop great test logs and in time you will as well. Keep up the creativity! 

Edited by Some Weeb
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