checkedsauce7 Posted August 14, 2021 Share Posted August 14, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XLt_W1xL3oyLDcgpLrQwR8-bnxBpskZD2Ew3ptIC4ZY/edit?usp=sharing goto go fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceese Posted August 19, 2021 Share Posted August 19, 2021 Test log assigned for grading Please wait 1-3 days for your final score Former Research Manager| EXP medic |MTF E11 CPL FartDaddy37AKA The guy who stole Rektifys rank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adlz Posted August 19, 2021 Share Posted August 19, 2021 75/100 Pretty short log, though it doesn't ruin its tone. Tone could've used a little work as well as staying consistent, we are a very serious facility working on dangerous anomalies. Felt a bit too cluttered, could move some things around. Don't start sentences with "was" or "the" also many errors and capitalization errors. Also make sure if you do a Keter test like this bring a RIS or MTF and contaminate Research Labs before, make sure people know to put on Hazmats before coming in. Basic format, but it very good for this short log. Really loved the idea of seeing 008's infection on human blood on a microscopic level. Love the use of pictures, though for the zombie photo you could've used a png not a jpeg. (cause the what behind it with the black background) I love the blood types being slower to infect for SCP-008. Little things like that make SCP-008 more interesting than just "zombie virus" C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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