Vonbraunthe7TH Posted June 30, 2021 Share Posted June 30, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LA_gEwyriZo4u-Afg6kYxzcRVdbhwe-sOXjOVUobhCc/edit?usp=sharing spoiler 049 can't cure cancer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jummy Posted July 25, 2021 Share Posted July 25, 2021 test assigned for grady Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardigan Backyardigan Posted July 28, 2021 Share Posted July 28, 2021 Score: 7/10 Pros Love the test idea Love the format Neutral No Pictures Cons Plenty of grammar issues Pretty short log Examples of grammar issues: "the class stopped breathing"  "we all know how much SCP that can heal are wanted by the foundation" (should be SCP's)  Overall not a bad log by any means. I recommend proof reading your logs to ensure minimal errors, and also find more to write about. (More background information would help as well) SCP-RP: CI 2LT | SEC 2LT | Lumberjack Union Chief Logging Operator, S4 Avium SL1 | Retired Research Supervisor | Retired CI 2LT, 1LT | 2x Former SEC 1LT, Retired CPT Former WC Nemesis | Former Nu7 HFTO MAJ/A3 Tesla | Retired Admin CCs: MTF Rev 26 'Vigilant Hero' | Vonzen Plushie | STARS | D-9177 'The Pill' | CI TF2 Heavy Achievements: Staff Of The Month | 11x Staff Of The Week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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