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Grade: 6.5/10

I absolutely love the creativity behind this

Aesthetically pleasing

Way too many grammar/spelling mistakes

Several phrases that were difficult to reaad

Examples of grammar mistakes

You are supposed to put a space after punctuation, and I don't think you did that once.

you spelt anomaly wrong at the very end ("anomalie")

"one days Moncher was talking with RM Jummy" (one day*)

 

 

Overall the log was pretty decent, the creativity behind this is amazing and keep that up, but I strongly recommend that you use something like Grammarly to proof read your logs for you to ensure minimal mistakes.

 

 

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