Jump to content

05-13 interrogation


Normal_Bagel

Recommended Posts

(Thats not how it works, anyone may grade it as normal, also we need access)

                                                      192412312_screenshot_2020-02-26_at_9-24-(1).png.43e614bc17bbf87004d3acba288c52df.png
                                                                             Chad of many names       Professional Shit talker

                                                                                       

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Grade: 59/100

Lore: 10/25
Barely has anything to do with the original
Creativity: 15/25
very basic interrogation with a demi-god. 
Presentation: 15/25
Good formatting and color key. Way too short for a log regarding O5
Writing: 19/25
Couple grammar mistakes, when characters talk, Use " ".

"The first draft of everything is Shit" - Ernest Hemingway

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Also you took some stuff from my logs, smh

sad face :pog:

 

                                                      192412312_screenshot_2020-02-26_at_9-24-(1).png.43e614bc17bbf87004d3acba288c52df.png
                                                                             Chad of many names       Professional Shit talker

                                                                                       

Link to comment
Share on other sites

×
×
  • Create New...