Mint Posted June 9, 2020 Share Posted June 9, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xN5idmrE3ptNIiZieQ823IOQ3joqB7BTGoi2g19-txw/edit MTF Nu7 Major || E11 1LT || Old CI SGT || Ret.LeadResearcher || || RHO-36 Penumbra Squad || || Mikes Favorite Son || OH3 RRH || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lee Posted June 10, 2020 Share Posted June 10, 2020 Test Assigned. Femboy Hooters. No Cogs he's mine. Omi9 2LT Lee JL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kumandant Posted June 11, 2020 Share Posted June 11, 2020 Score: 60/100 Grade: Standard Lore: 20/20 Everything seemed generally fine with the lore. SCP-939 eating speakers is an amusing thought. Creativity: 16/20 The question was poorly worded, and felt restrictive. Which is a shame because the idea was actually fairly creative! Perhaps you could have worded it better, maybe along the lines of "Can soundproof surfaces keep subjects hidden from SCP-939". Presentation: 14/20 This is simply an edit of the CI format. But I did enjoy the inclusion of photos, and the crane setup looked cool. Writing: 10/40 This whole log has very awkward wording, and it felt like an afterthought. I struggled to understand what this test was initially about. Try to put more time into your writing, and ensure that your sentences are easy to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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