asteriskmonkey Posted March 26, 2020 Share Posted March 26, 2020 <RND EYES ONLY> <Using Optic Scanners To Validate Personnel> <Clearance Validated> <Welcome, Authorized User> RND Research Report #Number-Letter Take. All. SCPs. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Case File: #4520 oscar-tango Full Name: [Your Name] Asterisk Current Position: [Your Rank] Senior Researcher ---------------------------------------------------------------- Date: [Date Redact The Year] 3/26/## Location: Site 05, Location Unknown SCPs Involved: [SCP] [Keep the Location The Same] scp 682 Hypothesis: [Make A Hypothesis On What You Think Will Happen] armor made from 682's bone will be stronger than our standerd issue Observation 1-A: [Talk About What You Did To Contain And Who Helped You Contain The SCP] [Follow This With An Audio Log] dont remember so [REDACTED] Researcher: [Redact The Rank Follow It With Your Name] ////////// Asterisk Subject: [SCP] 682 .[Here Is A Sample Of An Audio Log] . .*Crackling Noise* . [Begin Audio Log] . asterisk - hello alpha class today youll be shot while wearing this armor i made that will hopefully stop you from dying. . (Alpha Class then begin to look confused and roughly angered) . Asterisk - the infiltrator will now load 2 magizines into the chest area of the armor . (gun shots can be heard as alpha class yell) . (armor has small marks and dents but no holes) . asterisk - alpha class you may now take off the armor and resume you original dutys [End Audio Log] Observation 1-B: the armor did not seem to have any hole marks so ill try to mass reproduce this to be standerd issue for command and beta units ---------------------------------------------------------------- Errors or Safety Hazards: none Conclusion: we are able to raid better with less casulties due to this armor to one day be mass produced ---------------------------------------------------------------- [Name] Asterisk [Rank] Senior Researcher Area [REDACTED] Location Unknown Research Log Filed if you're your a better dipshit than the other one you are the best man in my book MTF Nu7 RCT/CI RND SVR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bionicle Posted April 2, 2020 Share Posted April 2, 2020 Grade: Creativity: 30/35. Bit of a standard idea, although I won't dock too many points because of that. There is only so much you can do with the same 15 SCPs. Presentation: 15/25. I think that you should write your tests on a google doc instead of just writing on the forums. I would also like it if you removed the areas that are a part of the natural format. It makes the log look not that good to me. On 3/26/2020 at 5:37 PM, asteriskmonkey said: SCPs Involved: [SCP] [Keep the Location The Same] Writing: 20/40 I'm noticing a lot of areas with a lack of capitals, and some areas in the audio log that seem a bit robotic. Test quality: Standard Extra Notes: I think that you should do 2 things to improve your logs. 1. Run them through grammarly. As I've stated a few times before, I think that you [and some others] should use this program to fix those writing errors that you can't catch. 2. Use SCPs that are not in game. Asterisk, I feel like you have gotten to the point where you have been there, done that with the SCPs in game. I think that you should sit down for a bit, and find an SCP that is interesting to you [it can be any SCP] read it through, and make a good, quality log. @asteriskmonkey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asteriskmonkey Posted April 3, 2020 Author Share Posted April 3, 2020 thank you @Bionicle if you're your a better dipshit than the other one you are the best man in my book MTF Nu7 RCT/CI RND SVR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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