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RND Research Report #Number-Letter 

Take. All. SCPs. 

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Case File: #4520 oscar-tango

 

Full Name: [Your Name] Asterisk 

 

Current Position: [Your Rank] Senior Researcher

 

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Date: [Date Redact The Year] 3/26/##

 

Location: Site 05, Location Unknown

 

SCPs Involved: [SCP] [Keep the Location The Same] scp 682

 

Hypothesis: [Make A Hypothesis On What You Think Will Happen]  armor made from 682's bone will be stronger than our standerd issue

 

Observation 1-A: [Talk About What You Did To Contain And Who Helped You Contain The SCP] [Follow This With An Audio Log] dont remember so [REDACTED]

 

Researcher: [Redact The Rank Follow It With Your Name]  ////////// Asterisk

Subject: [SCP] 682

.[Here Is A Sample Of An Audio Log] 

.*Crackling Noise* 

[Begin Audio Log] 

asterisk - hello alpha class today youll be shot while wearing this armor i made that will hopefully stop you from dying.

(Alpha Class then begin to look confused and roughly angered)

Asterisk - the infiltrator will now load 2 magizines into the chest area of the armor

(gun shots can be heard as alpha class yell)

(armor has small marks and dents but no holes)

asterisk - alpha class you may now take off the armor and resume you original dutys

 

[End Audio Log] 

 

 

Observation 1-B: the armor did not seem to have any hole marks so ill try to mass reproduce this to be standerd issue for command and beta units

 

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Errors or Safety Hazards: none

 

Conclusion: we are able to raid better with less casulties due to this armor to one day be mass produced

 

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[Name] Asterisk

[Rank] Senior Researcher

           Area [REDACTED] 

Location Unknown 

Research Log Filed 

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Grade: 

Creativity: 30/35. Bit of a standard idea, although I won't dock too many points because of that. There is only so much you can do with the same 15 SCPs.

Presentation: 15/25. I think that you should write your tests on a google doc instead of just writing on the forums. I would also like it if you removed the areas that are a part of the natural format. It makes the log look not that good to me.

On 3/26/2020 at 5:37 PM, asteriskmonkey said:

SCPs Involved: [SCP] [Keep the Location The Same]

Writing: 20/40 I'm noticing a lot of areas with a lack of capitals, and some areas in the audio log that seem a bit robotic.

Test quality:  Standard

Extra Notes: I think that you should do 2 things to improve your logs.
1. Run them through grammarly. As I've stated a few times before, I think that you [and some others] should use this program to fix those writing errors that you can't catch.
2. Use SCPs that are not in game. Asterisk, I feel like you have gotten to the point where you have been there, done that with the SCPs in game. I think that you should sit down for a bit, and find an SCP that is interesting to you [it can be any SCP] read it through, and make a good, quality log.

@asteriskmonkey

 

 

 

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