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Juno Arborius : Test #4 : 999 Bullets


G4M3R

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Grade: (95%) A

Test Quality: Quality

Lore: 20/20
I saw no problems with the lore.

Creativity: 15/20
This has been done before, however, you did explain that in your test log, so I docked fewer points, good job all around!

Presentation: 20/20
I loved reading this, it was nice and easy to read, the color difference doesn't hurt my eyes. I really liked it.

Writing: 40/40
I loved the way you wrote this, I enjoyed the pleasantness of it all and the fonts you used.

Just a couple of notes I think should be Included, these do not affect your grade at all.

Notes:
I personally enjoyed the photos as well, next time if you hold out your camera, it will get rid of the HUD.
Also, I do not think you should've given the MTF the gun, no matter how bad he wanted it. Remember you are always in FULL control of what happens in YOUR test.

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