Ocean Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wH8RGV7XkEx1I3XSB76VXyiWIwqAHig6VNuvAiqbBRg/edit?usp=sharing 1 Imperial RP | Ex Nova VCMDR Morpheus | Ex LTSL Val Kaiyo Police RP | PD CPL | Ex EMS EMT | Ex DOC CO | Bappo Family Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spice1 Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 Cool but please use commas, that was a pain to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhodes. Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 I'm not grading this but it is a detailed log good job as he said you can use more commas. ImpRP Retired Marshall SCPRP Retired Foundation Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slurmp Posted February 25, 2020 Share Posted February 25, 2020 TEST ASSIGNED FOR GRADING Foundation Doctor,FORMER E11 CPT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Parker Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 Grade: 97 Lore: 20/20 You followed 173's Lore. The things you added can be in the lore, so nothing far from it. Creativity: 20/20 Studying the feces and blood of 173 is something new, this can be used for future tests on 173 and I liked the observation part. Presentation: 18/20 You followed the format. I would like to see some pictures to illustrate and complement the observation part, adding color to some words will make this test amazing and easy to read. I liked the presentation of this Document. Writing: 39/40 Well Redacted, some minor mistakes. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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